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March 2, 2012
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I can't imagine you,
beside me,
waiting for my words.

Your eyes fixated,
on me,
expecting parting lips.

The furl of your brow,
questioning the silence,
that I have created.

I can't imagine you,
beside me,
waiting.
:iconyohkai:
Writings of the heart.

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:iconrizzan:
I like this one a lot, more than the other recent poem. It makes me very curious [nosy!] about what you had in mind at the time of writing. :P
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